Fog
My first act upon
"waking" (for I must call it that, though it doesn't quite suit) was
to take in my surroundings. To my surprise, I found that objects' names jumped
to me with curious ease. I was in a wood of some sort, how large, I could not
perceive, for all around me floated a white fog. The mist was so thick about me
that by looking at it my senses believed it to be concrete, and yet my hand
passed through it as if it were not there.
I knew I stood in
a wood because of the grasping branches which I could see quite clearly around
me for a few feet or so before they faded upwards onto some phantom trunk
cloaked in white. Dry leaves rasped to each other in a foreign language, and
the host of unseen trees around me creaked disapprovingly at my presence.
I stood, alone and
confused. What was I to do? I had a vague feeling that there was something I
was forgetting. Had I always been here? Was there anything beyond these trees
and this whiteness? Before I knew what was happening, I had begun to walk
forward, and as I did so, I realized that I had legs, and could move them in
such a way as to take myself somewhere else. The awe of this discovery led me
to the next discovery, which was that I was in complete control of all my
faculties, without even knowing what these faculties were.
I continued on my
way for some time, musing on my newfound abilities. As I walked, I knew
instinctively that I should step over that log, or I would go sprawling onto
the mossy ground. I knew that if I didn't hunch my back in an effort to lessen
my height, I would be clawed in the face by that low hanging branch. My face
throbbed with an imaginary sting at the thought.
I had been walking
for a quite a while before I noticed that the range of my vision had expanded;
the mist had faded allowing me to see that I was entering a clearing. The patch
of dew-laden grass twinkled in the sun, like my father's eyes when he told a
joke. I smiled at the memory of my father, with his dove-grey beard and hearty
laugh. And then, as the sun rose up and wiped away the mist, I remembered
everything.
Great type of poem. Was more of a short story for me haha.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm glad you thought it was a short story, because that's what it was supposed to be. :)
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